- After we showed our music video to the rest of the class, we were given feedback, both positive and negative.
- one of the students said that we should have lit the studio part much better, but on our defense this was purposely done, giving a rather commercial effect. and making rather beautiful shadows of the boys, this could connotate the idea of their current backgrounds and how they are different from other bands.
- This is some of the positive aspects of the music video:
- Editing- Gives it a good pace, hectic just like the song is.
- Performances- Look genuine, un staged and fun.
- Its just fun and funny.
and here are the negative, these are the areas of improvement.
- Park bench shots are too long
- Park slide scene could have been sped up , it drags on a little bit
- Gun kissing scene should have been the last cut
I went back to the music video and changed the last part of the music video, cutting out the rest of the clips to create the Gun kissing scene to be the last one.
Obviously your digipack and poster need to be added, along with some posts showing how you have developed them - scan and add your hand-drawn versions for example. Otherwise, your blog is good up to Christmas but a bit sparse after - you should pad it out over the next week before the deadline. Also, check all your posts for spelling which is TERRIBLE in places - you can spell check them before publishing.
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